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Haiku - Three

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Poem Number 1959

blue sky, blue water...
white orchids entwine our hearts
kaleialoha

Commentary:
sure could use
such a paradise
about now
.
--eritain
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Such magic words for a magical place. Lida Jo from Idaho
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