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Poem Number 5174
Bleak winter morning
Color lost in maze of gray
Oh! A cardinal!
One of the best haikus I've seen. I know what the winter day looked like. That sudden flash of red of the cardinal is like a ray of sunshine.
Beautiful, BR!! Excellent understated elegance!! Can't Haiku better than that! Lida Jo from Idaho
I didn't write this, I only commented on it. Wish I could claim it, but, I can't!
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