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Gothic/Surreal - Three

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Poem Number 1629

one must decided if they shall observe
the particle or the wave
the piss or the wind
.
one must decide.
one must embrace
the piss or the wind
-- decide.
demanding doesn't make it so
deciding does - make it so.
decided: the piss AND the wind

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