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Poem Number 1612

if it was a good idea yesterday
it might be a good idea tomorrow

Commentary:
you are the king of Homily :)
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naw - really just persephone
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a symbol of the budding and dying of nature.
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hey bud...throw me a pomegranate, please
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i don't know what it tastes like...
upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/2/29/Pomegranate03_edit.jpg
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it looks erotique
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(enlarge the pic)
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and also sweet ;b
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"...But before she was released to Hermes, who had been sent to retrieve her, Hades tricked her into eating three pomegranate seeds, (or six, or four according to some versions of the myth) which forced her to return to the underworld for one month each year for every seed that she ate..."
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yes, and her mom got mad! hence winter....lol
~hugs~
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the coldest winter i ever experienced was a summer in san francisco
~m. twain
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lol :D dilettante!!
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tomorrow?
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you are going away now?
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buy
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