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Poem Number 2656

The joy of dogs
sniff and hump
Piss and run
The joy of babes
Gift of life
The next Generation
Commentary:
One joy leads the other, one joy obeys. The fight between joys becomes commerce. All joys indoctrinated, they become non- competitive In the mean scalpel of time joy suffers ontological demise. Joy dies and gives birth to dog.
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that's fucking deep, man.
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