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Gothic/Surreal - One

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Poem Number 2641

with a provocative shock of hair
i convince you that i truly care
but then do something awful
-Peter Cetera
that scares me for life
to wear a Mozart wig with a frightful puff
would be such a delight
but scarcely enough
To show you that I care

Commentary:
sounds like the general flow of past times...
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