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Poem Number 2660

Death
Commentary:
I.

"Death?

You want to know about death?

In this world
and a million others

Spirits appear in this world
in deference of death;
and then again (simultaneously)

it's saving them from what
We all really fear:
being alone but alive after death."

II.

"All things serve the Lord
except death. How could it?

Straitening my tie, I intone
Nothing from nothing

makes a poor excuse
for the indignity
of death."

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