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Poem Number 836

If I planted a hickory tree
I could use it's branches to spank you with laid across my knee!
Commentary:
btw - just for the record: i'm not into bondage, pain, spanking (well, sometimes under certain conditions, but lightly). i'm must having fun with ya!
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Second sentence VERY poor engrish. Go to school white gurl, learn language, come back after practice you, write pooems here. 'kay?
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