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Poem Number 21977

Pre-Sage, Huh?
Commentary:
A wizzard is a wizzard is a wizzard is a wizzard is a wizzard is a wizzard is a wizzard is a wizzard, squared.

But that's not truly viewing matters in rewind.
For that, you need to hire out some actual VHS tape,
and some actual VHS recorder...

Then you must commit all the images to the 'film',
along with lossy audio.

Then you go to sleep, and
then you wake up to see what happens.

/rv
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