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Poem Number 21974
Donwtown IPP is a short internet experience that exhibits how, on IPP, there are lower class people that write, and then upper ones like runningvein, riverfr0zen or giggling_urethra.
One of the best relationships in Donwton IPP belongs to a woman named 'amber', who is the sort of 'house woman' of the whole house. She know exactly where every stocking is worn.
In 2002 runningvein. a transient suffering from gout, told amber that she need not make such displays of herself, but it was not given to fruition. The mad woman continued to do as she pleased, sometimes even calling a dubious Howard type character into the bargain.
In 2008, shortly after he had sent her flowers through a very expensive Romanian flower service, this Romanian Woman decided that she no longer should associate with runningvein, and that she should post a photo of her staring adamantly into the entrance of the new Galactic Order.
Runningvein watched as this woman ran off to have her own life, and live her own little life, while, for him, more massive things were happening. For e.g. it was heard a little later 2008, maybe July, that her best idea of life is to get a house in 'Tuscanny'.
"What is this?" wondered runningvein. "A lover for ants?" /rv
'Dubious'? Dubious, my ass, you are invoking your own ghost, imagine a man punching himself in the face with each word, it's you.
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