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Poem Number 20826
Some Benefits of Being Mindlessly Disposed
Commentary:
One of the lessons you learn is about how everything is not 'black and white'.
Because you were born in the late seventies, way after color was invented.
Too bad you got injected right into the eighties.
I remember your face, whenever they produced those ... 'scenarios'.
You were, like, "dude, i can totally pwn this."
Like thinking about how your baby brain had been operating,
at that time, not knowing anything about 3D glasses,
or invisibility suits.
Have you even thought about sniping somebody just based on sonar?
-fr0
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