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Salon of Poetry for Critique - Four

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Poem Number 404

Oh crustacean unfortunate
Enthroned on my Blue Willow plate
What wonders of the deep couldst thou unfold
Had not thy boiling come...alas, too late!
And, what clould have been our salvation
Becomes, again, nothing but a seafood dinner!
Oh! killer of the prophets and slayer of those sent forth unto us!

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