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Poem Number 4794

dancing around the room
to a fizzing radio
broken aerial
works better with a holding hand
turned it off-
sure i could still hear music.
it continues, in my heart, mind, and soul, sending vibrations through my body
Commentary:
so where does the rainbow end? nowhere and everywhere... just some thoughts at my end, lol - been dancing to a danish musical, on the theme of Stevenson's treasure island, small world -- allan
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