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Poem Number 22982

the swirling leafs

Commentary:
those leafs are still gently swirling against the concrete shore,
as the endless circles of car horns, lovers, and cracked desires
find there way into the lake.
a suffocating beauty of pollution,
swirling with the same poetry that has run through
everything,
before eyes began brightly, then comfortable,
opening.
`
long,
long before the words form
was shaped into a modern payday
of past and present.
`
the lake has always been speaking this feeble
but somehow perfect language.
that moves around the leafs,
breaking light through desire.
`
and that plastic bag so brutally thrown into it,
may be the final suffocation,
is forgiven and woven.
creating new words for a new world
`
our product in the great stupidly of animal necessity
is short.
`
and the lake will whisper on long after the lovers have left.
`
raul

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