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Poem Number 23329

Musec

Commentary:
you're my music
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the perfect counterpoint
a harmony to my melody
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our staccato steps
in syncopation
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the wind plays its fingers
through your hair
plucking strings
a dance of
intertwined notes
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my heart beats in time
with the tempo of
your spoken lyrics
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from her dark hip
the moon's curve
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