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Poem Number 23235

The Garden
The Garden
Commentary:
The Garden

A footbridge spans
a running brook,
leads wandering feet
into a garden,
a fairy tale garden
of flowers
and light.

And, children follow
the piper's tune and
span bridge
across the
rippling brook
and in the
midst of scented
blooms
disappear
forever.
----JFC
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