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Poem Number 8905

leaves in transition
colors of change in progress
bearing the last fruits
growing older with time
Commentary:
i wrote these tree haikus this week from what i saw ...on my way to work ..Deb4us
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are they, dm?
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I might agree
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Of spring. Sorry I had to say that, even though I know it's out of form. Fapral
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are they? i think so ..a haiku can take on many variations ,,17 sylabbles or less ,,also ..the poular 5 7 5 ,,,at least thats my understanding of it ..i could be wrong tho ..hahaha ..im just trying to learn how * ..patiance with me please ** ,,,,thanks dm
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