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Poem Number 3876

Fragments of life gone by
etched deep
into the forgotten
desires of our youth
revealed in retraced memories, these rain dropping thoughts
wash way the foundations
of my sanity
trifle with my will
to continue
supply warmths illusion
in my icy bed
Commentary:
Phil and Anon.....thanks so much for taking the time to contribute to my poetry...loved what you added.....*warm smile*......
Hope to visit this site often.....*happy smile*....
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