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Poem Number 10742
I felt excitement as I walked out,
and felt freedom walk in
I felt your eyes burn through me in disbelief
and as I stepped into my new life
I left behind a ragged shell
of what I had become with you
i think this poem describes just how i felt when i walked away...i like it! :) justme
sounds a blessed departing--window watcher
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