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Poem Number 3593

I used to be 'now'
I used to be 'here' and 'zen'
Remember back then?
If i could be 'now
cutting arrowhead of time
could i ever rhyme ?
Loose me from the bow !
perfect speed is being there
neither fast nor slow.
Feathers of my tail !
whistle in the wind of time
leave a singing trail.

Commentary:
Faiku! mark : )
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gesundheit!!
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Faiku very much lol mark : ))
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I faiku are a wonderful poet!!:))
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Well thank you. Can't find another 'faiku' joke, only an abusive one. I'll
save it in case you change your mind about my poetry..lol.. mark : )))

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evening mark(sman), nice shooting :) - &a
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allan, bullseye!! mark : )))
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what a wonderful combo you two make...can I have a bite::%!!!!! -pen
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Hi pen, thanks, but I must admit to not understanding your comments. What
does % mean? What do you want to bite? .....I've read about you...mark : )))
P.S. clare has a poem which ends 'bite me, bite me, bite me!' ; ))
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well, mark...only the first part of the comment included you...I am a bit drunk and less precise that I should have been. the % wil be understood by the indended who no doubt will rofl upon seeing this:))) -pen
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well, mark...only the first part of the comment included you...I am a bit drunk and less precise that I should have been. the % wil be understood by the intended who no doubt will rofl upon seeing this:))) -pen
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hiccup!
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...'you read about me'? more than likely, I don't want to know...lol...pen
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roflol ::%%%
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