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Poem Number 2974

I have sailed the seas of technicolor vomit
wallowed in a million prefabricated acts of violence
been wrench and jolted as isat motionless
adreniline pumping beside the glowing tube
had my nervous system jerked off by pros in theatres
untill the childhood vampire became just another show
what ever jumps out and drools or gnashes ...just a joke
So now, I don't even brake for little children anymore
at least, not unless they are already bleeding.
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line 3: been wrenched and jolted as I sat motionless
adrenaline
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