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Poem Number 19933

Here And There

Glum faces sprouting out of
humdrum clothing with drab colors
remind me of garden weeds

I sprinkle my stuff on them:
a few quips here, a joke there
and watch the face bloom into smile

I also use such weed killers
as asking about their health
how their folks are doing now

They open up like a flower
emitting fresh new fragrance
in touching human stories

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Commentary:
I like the analogy. Miss Tat
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done 4-18
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