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Poem Number 18837

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the wishing star~

Commentary:
the wish is simply
divine,
and beautiful
as it came from the star,
the falling star,
which fell
specifically
into the pools of reflection
dancing across your
eyes for me,
as i stood
shaking and breathing
quickly,
thinking of kissing
you, wanting to wish
that i might,
and you might also,
and it fell
from your eyes
to mine,
allowing my wish to be wished,
and that i could
swell to the heavens
and melt as rain
and breath fire
into stirring wind,
that i could
soar with celestial wings
and crush the towering
walls of all fear and pain,
that i could do any
of these would mean nothing
without my first wish,
my secret thought
that i carry
between only us,
and you must
give in because
in your eyes i have seen the
star falling, i have made the wish,
and i long,
sweet softness,
loving bliss,
gentle touch
of all
that i desire,
sealed forever,
with a kiss.


)Kaleb
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hmmmm .... love the feeling! Kaleb -- i made a wish once, came true & found myself married .... Drm
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mmmmm lovely, "....the falling star, which fell specifically into the pools of reflection dancing across your eyes for me"...*sigh*,.... such beautiful romantic thoughts in poetry Kaleb. Very nice! :-) ~ audee
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