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Poem Number 18833

I have so many plans lined up
Each to be followed exactly
till total success is achieved
You see, I'm a perfecionist

A pipe-smoking egg head told told me
in between loud lip-smacking puffs
it would take a lifetime to complete
each one of my plans as I wished

You see he is a professor
who's followed by a cloud of knowledge
He gave me ten lifetimes for success
Alas, I have only one lifetime!


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Commentary:
Ah yes so familiar. Nicely done
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Closed May 17
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