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Poem Number 18758
the last brave birds sing goodnight
the clean cool breeze tucks in the trees
the roof under my body feels firm yet fragile
the dusky dim sky gathers the earth beneath her
the sounds of the evening ring clear, unmuffled by the day
in the night, my thoughts have a voice
and my feelings have a soul.
Description is mesmerizing as the real atomsphere can do to you. Ian
well described, both physically and emotionally. very nice. ms
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