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Poem Number 10928

Grain upon grain great mountains rise,
Or wither into plain.
Drop by drop a might y ocean roars
Or tides fade unto horizen
Star by star the sky stretches out above
Or morning light hides them
Note by note my song is sung,
Crecendo, diminish, piano.
Blade by blade mighty fields are grown
As grasses bend in the wind
Second by seconds many years go by
Or time becomes eternity
Kiss by kiss you are sealed to me,
In life as well as death.
Commentary:
Let's play...fallon
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Let the games begin..... =] ~ Zara
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Us and Cosmos in a time capsule. Key words resonate in pairs. Well done. = Ed
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