The Interactive Poetry Pages

Aha! Poetry

You are invited to add your own commentary for this poem.

Poem Number 10901

surge
adrenalin sweat kate you are the blasting of the furnace
dear lord despite this time so fleeting surreal
burst
.
Commentary:
dt :: Interesting, with hidden (to me) meaning. Is it about getting high? :: Wally
-------
I see an intensely sensual picture here. R.J.G.
-------
Vividly erotic and courageously personal. ~Van
-------
a very brief relationship.......dt
Your comments. Remember to mention the line number if it applies.
Sign your name if you want to:
Central Viewing Page.
Aha! Poetry Top Page