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Poem Number 10840

how many ways the end can come?
how many days will it cover my life?
the end ... dreaded ...
as the choices lay themselves
on the old, splinter-covered, wooden table
and as I sit in the old chair get a splinter up my ass
and infection sets in, I know the end has come in my end
oh what a way, oh what a day...the end...dreaded
Commentary:
anon(Line 6) = For diverting our thoughts, you should have more than a splinter up your ass! = Viagro
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barring line 6, this was evolving into a very interesting poem. it was an intriguing subject and i was curious as to which direction it would take...ms
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