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Poem Number 10175

after listening to the radio in the morning my head bursts with song
i got to get away i wanna fly away
so take me up to the top of the city where just a couple of pigeons are living
cuz i believe i can touch the sky
so put me up on the angel's shoulders up on the highest point of the city
have you ever seen a woman taken by the wind taken by the wind
oh i hear the sky the fog and the rain whispering
come up and be a kite and fly a diamond nite
with the man on the wind and the westmoon
i got to get away i got to get away - i wanna fly away
keep looking out for the ladder for with all this bliss
i might be blown away off the angel's shoulders
open all the doors and windows your mind your eyes your smiles and mine
before all of this makes my head burst with trapped joy
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Commentary:
ok... line 7 and the last 3 are mine... the rest is
from various lyrics, see "view authors" for details
if you like... musically yours... (rhiannon)
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clever...m.e.
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interesting--window watcher
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