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Poem Number 12116

was there a word
within
before we started counting
time
in all oblivion worlds
echo
i am i am the one
one
who created you
you are my subjects, my children, my slaves
in eternal and timeless chains you shall dwell
for i am lord and master over you, i am the one who gave you life
and i shall take it away

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