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Poem Number 12050

It's A friends birthday

Commentary:
It's a friends Birthday today
so were all going out
going to the bar where
we'll hollar scream and shout
kicking back the cold ones
sipping a few slow ones
spending from my pockets
till the money runs out
but thats not the price to pay
No
that comes the next day
two asprin and a coke
to get the day started
remembering not what you did
and in who's face you farted
smelling of smoke and beer
walk to the coffee shop
in hangover cheer
let the venom from your mouth
as you tip the young waitress.
Zymoscopebgo~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`
just made it up off the top o the ol mellon
I'll try n not make it all come true anyways
see ya tomorrow~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`
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The Idea is that its kind of a silly ritual
and even a little immature
but hey I'm still young enough to dance
so the truth is that I'll go out and rejoice in my friends happiness
(dosent mean I have to do some of the stupidness)and wish him a happy birthday
:) zymoscopebgo
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Zym....have fun! 'a'
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