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Poem Number 962

I love mowing the lawn, smelling the scent of fresh air and fresh grass
but I'd rather be at the beach, scoping some ass
or perhaps I will meet some one really nice and eventually important
Commentary:
pitful and childish
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i don't think you have to be annonymous to say that...it is time honored pastime.. along with swimming...suppose one could drown in either.. it's finding the proper balance in all things that is the problem ...but now that i am totally reformed.. i am glad i didn't say it Lar
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line 3 lar.. hi lil.. ignore tham they feed on attention

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I think the thought police are cruising for "bad boys and girls again".....I would like to announce that I am here.- one bad penny
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when i was a lad.. a lot of fun could be had on a penny...lar
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