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Poem Number 6572

Mangey, diseased dog that you are
you are a mangled, self-centered, inconsiderate, inhumane person
and I am the flea on your ass
trying to suck as much blood from you
as you drained from my heart
and eliminate the caca from my life
Commentary:
this Poem makes me quiver!! BRAVO!! ZigZagMan
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8 ball your addition made me laugh, great line! MM
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EXPRESSIVE REVENGE!
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