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Poem Number 6562

Father
hear my prayer
purify my being
consume me in your blazing fire
refine
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Shepherd
my heart wanders
guide me in righteousness
this little lamb is lost without
your staff
~
Jesus
Counselor mine
Protector, Saviour, Lord
hear my simple plea for mercy
I'm Thine
~
~kristin
Commentary:
Kristin,this is so nice ~PamelaD
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Kristin, I love this simple yet powerful plea to the Lord. I also desire his guidance, love & touch! LSG/JonA
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powerful, Kristin!!! love it ... Drm
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Kristin ++ This is a nice poem. It shows that a creative effort can beautiful, irrespective of religion, politics, or nationality. May the fanatics of the world grasp this simple fact! ++ atheist
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