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Poem Number 3835

I used to believe
now I only make believe
it's the same thing, right?
Right or wrong it works the same and only your heart knows
Commentary:
brilliant pen. mark : )))
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oh boy brillant is right..I need another word..a life philo in 17 sylb's.........jake
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i used to MAKE love
now i also SEE and DO
i can't help, with you
-- allan
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Nice work...W.C..:)
By the way....can anyone tell me how I can post a poem in here...just doesn't seem to be working for me.....*very confused*..Thanks...:):)
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