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Poem Number 22970

Fire

Two types there are in wars
Soldiers give and take
hostile fire across
the enemy line
But on their own side
of that very line
is another type
that's called friendly fire
Pat Tillman knows all
about it, but then
he's too dead to tell
us all about it.

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