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Poem Number 22812

Take a chance
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What chance are you willing to take
What steps in life are you willing to make
are you locked in stuck in dead end time
living this life that someone else has designed
Are rendered useless by the life you live
In your relationships how much do you really give
Back and Forth do these questions cross your mind
Rethink your steps , has comfort made you so blind
Commentary:
Why do we get so comfortable and forget what is really important in every day life? We do we let relationships pass away and our memories eclipse yesterday? ((()))Peacefrog
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Nice rhymed poem, Peacefrog - Tom
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Good job, Peacefrog. Gives the reader much to ponder. ms
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i like it, its so true about the world. you're expected to live a life designed by some one else(line 4). neat poem, nicely rhymed!--Unknown
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