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Poem Number 19702

It's me

Commentary:
The drunken swann div what I did offen the tailgat of my truck
Was ta me a gracfull flite ofa buterfly
When I was sober I reeflectted
Id was meanin ta lan inna pon next ta da truck
I fell short an hit my head
Or I wooda drownded inna pon
My eagil div was a penguin floopp
I swore off booz that there day
That why Im her ta say
Dont drink an div
Is wurse then drinken an driven
Thats why ise her ta scrible
This her pome

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billybob
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I'd hafta call dis one a masterpeace!
Uncle Joe
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Thanx Uncle Joe, I was jus riten the truth aint that an eye opener. billybob
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:-)
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Very distinctive style of writing.. interesting. K-1
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You don't expect the general populus that visit this site to believe that
you are that ignorant do you? Bryan
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ditto Bryan. Kukla
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ditto K-1. Matachine
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Your right. I have been obnoxious it seems. It was a light-hearted attempt at
humor, but truthfully it's not me. I never intended for the populus to take
it wrong. Billybob
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It's populace.
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closed, 12/26
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