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Poem Number 13037

Desperation kicks my sensibility between the eyes
Depression kinks my stomach in knots
Deception raped my passion for a loved one
Despondency breaks my spirit
Dejected, my pain is shared
Desolation enjoys no company
Downcast and beaten, my life aches
Drastic waves of pain flash within me
Despicable breach of trust invaded our Sacrement
Dormant feelings rescued by letters
Day by Day are love grows deeper
Commentary:
last line, are=our...oops, j
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mmmmm "D" day, :-)
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Beginning rhyme! Interesting variation on poetry. = Cy
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