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Poem Number 7588

smoltering embers
a burnt marshmellow
tree scewers
and songs sung around
the dying fire.
Commentary:
Is this haiku? -- Millie
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Last Comment [since deleted] made by Ex-Con still on parole. - Idiot Chaser
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i spelled the word wrong ,,,i intended the word to be skewers . thanks DM
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marshmellow is also mis-spelled; it should be marshmallow -- the compulsive proofreader
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