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Poem Number 23345
taken out early in the game
Commentary:
Taken out early in the game
he broke my neck, he`s to blame
he was going too fast to avoid a crash
his bitch in his lap licking his lash
they didnt get hurt not even a scratch
now im a friggin cripple with hate building its patch
i`ll never golf again no softball no life
i`ve lost everything my house my kids my wife
i live in a dump on $900 a month and i ponder the end
by my own hand but it wouldnt help anyone who do still depend
on some advice or just to talk things thru
wanting me to tell them what to do
it`s hard to care when all you know is pain
no matter what i do the result`s the same
i thank GOD every day for letting me live
but secretly he knows im ready to give
i cant take much more everyday is the same no relief in sight
my memories are mostly gone the days are one
all rolling together as if they`re none
only one thing keeps me from hell
and i`m sorry its you that i must tell
the one thing worth living this life
is the fact i got rid of my wife.........classic38
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Quite powerful and emotional. I'm glad you've gotten your life back and are here, able to share your thoughts and words with us. ms.
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