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Poem Number 23284

Vacation Fantasies
Commentary:
awesome
peaks and valleys
searching for a new zeal
slowly my soul boards the plane to
my heart
~
stranger
I have known almost all my life
gently rests beside me
waits for me to
arrive
life flows again
within a timeless space
reaching out for untouchable
sweet rest
~
once more
I see the face I used to love
words she's longing to hear
begin to flow
with ease
~
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