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Poem Number 23281

Thank you - Eugene ( A Bus Ride)
Commentary:
darkness
slowly subsides
hope wells inside
fresh breeze... flowers looking so much
brighter
looking...
hidden faces
once concealed... now revealed
all of them looking beautiful...
today
seeing
mother and child...
young girl's reddest lipstick...
dear old lady smacking her lips
throughout
sunshine
filling my heart
traveling with its rays
on a free tour of life... I love
this place
(In Memory of Amelia Worth)
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