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Poem Number 23032
Shelter me as time stands still
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vestibules of light dance slowly toward the sun
the night divides the space between
atlast the morning has come
shadows escape and slowly dissipate
as we bask in the hot bright sunlight
this one moment in time
away from the stress of everyday life
this vacation from a focused mind
please help me make time stand still !!!!
Commentary:
I wish as a child, teenager, young adult that I was was'nt in such a hurry to grow up!
~Peacefrog~
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My lover is always young, handsome, suspended in time. But I, alas, grow older and closer to death. The perpetual lover lives in literature and poetry and we of the wasting bodies can only worship from a distance.
sg
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