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Poem Number 20593

waiting for rain
Waiting for the rain of forgiveness
To wash away the tears of regret
Gouging furrows of sorrow
On my face...and yet
glimmer of hope, wiser still, not to pass this mountain again
Commentary:
standing in the warm sun
the burn of your mouth
still on my shoulder
hot on my eyelids
lips and fingers
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i close my eyes
and wait for rain
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thistle
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Made this morning bitter guy stop and smile.

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another beautiful piece ... Drm
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I fell in love with this the moment i read it. In these words you share a moment that is deeply felt. Thank you for allowing us to feel it. ~obscured
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