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Poem Number 16865

You pursue me
in strange places
In every cleft you drip
and invade the land
behind my skin
~
So much you demand
Threatening to turn up
on the other side of desire
~
So I, without resistance
submit with senses stretched
Opening myself everywhere
to this growing abyss of lust
~Alice~
Commentary:
wow, Alice! this makes my breath catch in my throat a little...ok, a lot. very sensual. love '..with senses stretched..'
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sensual and erotic, good stuff. ms
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