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Poem Number 16540

peace
Commentary:
my peace is green
grass for miles
and the blue
sky above me
with little dots
of fluffy clouds
that peak my
imagination
try as i may
to remember
certain words said
i come across
a blank feeling
but not emptyness
for the true peace
wasn't the words
but the person
who was in
front of me
~alexis
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I like this alexis. My peace is green too! -jeffh
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