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Poem Number 953

When I look into your eyes....
a million possibilities of your delight
surface from the depth
to blossom, pop'ing water-lilies
in the ponds of your pupils ...
perfect valleys are thy skin ...
As I trace the contours of your voice
with my soft and flowwing fingers
tingling tingling tremors felt
long long before your tsunami of tears

Commentary:
magnificent lines phil ! - allan
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I think allan has great aim! -pen
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could'nt dream of a better carma girl to cover my back, youre aiming pretty good tonight ! - allan
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thanks allan, been in the middle of a dry spell..cowgirl looking for water...-pen
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don't have to look further, you're always a refreshing fountain pen (mean it too) - allan
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