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Poem Number 4437

Bare beneath my suit,
all business, don't you know.
I came for this-
pink fleshed, delicious.
Blow sincerely in my ear.
I'll take notes, while essential instincts
drive me hot cold wild
with urgent understanding.
Unchain my purple desires, please;
they ache for liberation.

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Io. very clear and strong. mark
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