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Poem Number 16350
I wrote this poem for you Jeff
Commentary:
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Spooky Mooky
are you a bookie
disguised as cookie?
No, you're gookie
playing hooky
as real kooky
poetry jockey
without own nooky!
Quit the quicky
shows you're rookie
drunk on Saki
just to be tacky
if not wacky
It's all yucky!
--Darmo
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hey Darmo, we fight fire with water here, not fire.
-chez
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i'm with chez
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thanks for all the defense, i know your heart was in the right place;
but i think we need to love Mooky, and not tear him down. Remember,
there is a light with in us all, we need to fan their flames of virtue until they are blazing fires.. inspiring us all.
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Good poem! Whats a Mooky?
****Mooky Heart-throb
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